You all made such HUGE improvements the second time round! Well done. I hope you will remember all the ‘green’ tips for the next Big Write. I can’t wait to read them!
Well I deffinately agree and the fact that this week we are all focusing about story writing will give us a boost up resulting to even better achievements to the next Big Write.
It was a very intelligent idea and I have improved so much by looking at my mistakes. I agree with Miss Hayward, partly because I’m in her class, that we all made huge improvements!!!!!! Well Done!!!
I think that Miss Hayward did most of the work because she was the one who told us how to make our writing so much better than the first time. I agree with all of you!!
You all made such HUGE improvements the second time round! Well done. I hope you will remember all the ‘green’ tips for the next Big Write. I can’t wait to read them!
Well I deffinately agree and the fact that this week we are all focusing about story writing will give us a boost up resulting to even better achievements to the next Big Write.
It was a very intelligent idea and I have improved so much by looking at my mistakes. I agree with Miss Hayward, partly because I’m in her class, that we all made huge improvements!!!!!! Well Done!!!
I agree that our second time showed off what we could really do!
I think that Miss Hayward did most of the work because she was the one who told us how to make our writing so much better than the first time. I agree with all of you!!
My latest big write was to write a fable. When I started planning I had no clue, however, by the end I had a really great fable to write!!!